The original version of poem, I once wrote about –
Kaum ke khadim ki hai jageer Vande Mataram
Mulk ke hai vaaste akseem Vande Mataram
Zalimon ko hai udhar bandook apni par garoor
Hai idhar hum bekson ka teer Vande Mataram
Katl kar hum ko na katil tu hamare khoon se
Teg par ho jayega tehreer Vande Mataram
Fikr kya jallad ne gar katl kar bandhi kamar
Rok dega zor se shamsheer Vande Mataram
Zulm se gar kar diya khamosh mujhko dekhna
Bol Utthegi meri tasveer Vande Mataram
Sarzami England ki hil jayegi do roz mein
Gar dikhayegi kabhi taaseer Vande Mataram
Santri bhi muztarib hain jab ki har jhankar se
Bolti hai jail mein zanzeer Vande Mataram
– Vishvnath Sharma
(During my visit to War Memorial Museum, Red Fort)
Here is from original post and the one I used to whistle –
Chheen sakti hai nahin sarkar Vande Mataram
Ham garibon ke gale ka har Vande Mataram.Sar chadon ke sar me chakkar, uss samay aate zaroor
Kaanon mein pahunchi jahan, jhankar ‘Vande Matarm’Jail mein chakki ghaseete, bhooka se veh mar raha
Phir bhi veh keh raha, bezar Vande MataramMaut ke munh mein veh khada, keh raha jallad se
Ghomp do seene mein, talvar Vande MataramDoctron ne nabz dekhi, sir hila kar keh diya
Isse to ho gaya hai, Aazar Vande MataramEid Holi aur, Shubh Raat se bhi sau guna
Hai hamara ladala, tyohar Vande MataramZalimon Ka Zulm to, Kafoor sa ud jayega
Faisla hoga, sare darbar Vande MataramChheen sakti hai nahin sarkar Vande Mataram
Ham garibon ke gale ka har Vande Mataram…
I have been looking for this beautiful song for a very long time. We used to sing it in school and yes got prizes for it too. Thanks!